Be conversational: Write as if relaying your experience to a good friend.
Be thorough: Mention your favorite products or services offered by this business, such as menu items, home delivery or spa treatments.
Be local: Identify the neighborhood where the business is located and mention nearby attractions when relevant.Wright's cleaning is the worst!! This guy is a con-artist. Worked for the San Luis Obispo County as a janitor then opened his own cleaning company and then went around stealing things out offices he cleaned in but also stealing clients from people who he was doing business with on top of that. Bringing his own kids in the offices after hours and cleaning at the same time, a real liability issue! If you go downtown at the County government records department, you'll find Wright listed for criminal activity and went to jail for stealing working as a janitor.
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